Blue Fairy

Hannah and Ivy- Hannah and Ivy sat laughing in their first class of the new term. Last year they had become friends with Henry the year before and often heard ...

Oh this looks like fun. I'm going to make two characters Character: Hannah Occupation: Student Age: 13 Appearance: Slim, straight light brown hair, azure blue eyes, wears alot of pink, ...

I thought he was being sent back because of those US media found out about it or something. He doesn't want to come back and sit around in Windsor. I ...

(Rose) Rose took her elbow off Lexy's chest, rolled across the ground and reluctantly got to her feet. She looked back at Lexy and offered out her hand. Lexy took ...

Hi I don't know if this will help but it might:

I found it on google while I was looking for writing websites. This looked best :D

Hi Vierce I really enjoyed reading this. I loved the way you described the setting and the way you showed Louis' actions. :D Now to improve: With little sense of ...

(Rose) Rose lay on her back in the dark. Everyone had left her. She couldn't see where Lexy was lying. She didn't even now if Lexy was still alive, she ...

one of those cute little kids with ponytails, sucking on a lollipop or in this case more like a pen. :D Blue Fairy

One of those little kids that wonders around sucking a lollipop or in this case a pen.

Hi Ghost I don't understand why you have put each sentence on a new line. It looks more like a detailed plan then a story. I know you have a ...

(Rose) Rose leapt to her feet in shock as she heard the helicopter blades chop through the air. She glanced down at Lexy who was still withering in pain and ...

hahaha I didn't get it :( but now I do :D

Good luck in eveything you do Jack. :D Good bye

I was just about to go to sleep when it happen. It really scared me but quite alot of people slept through it. The epicentre was in lincolnshire wasn't it?